I Wish I Were A Fish
I Wish I Were A Fish
I wish, I wish
I were a fish
A flounder
Half pounder
A snapper
How dapper
A yellowfin
With a grin
A permit
No hermit
A halibut
Not a mutt
A flying fish
What a dish
A grouper
How super
A salmon
How jammin’
A trout
That’s stout
I wish, I wish
I were a fish
In the sea
Safe and free
Because There’s No You
I try to be strong
I try to be brave
I try not to cry
I try to behave
I try not to shake
I try to be tough
I try to smile through
But it’s not enough
I cannot stop crying
I cannot stop shaking
I cannot start smiling
My insides are quaking
I cannot see clearly
I cannot break through
I cannot stop yearning
Because there’s no you
My Light
When you’re feeling the darkest
And the sun just won’t shine
When you’re lower than low
Just put your hand in mine
My light will chase the clouds
And bring back your glow
I’ll lift your spirits higher
And save you from below
You never have to worry
I’ll be hovering near
Whenever you need me
I’ll be here
Torture Chamber
Francencense fills the air
The room is still and bright
A baby cries, a cat meows
A small child screams in fright
Downstairs, the torture chamber
Waits for some new flesh
Metal gleaming, gears gnashing
Figures wrapped in mesh
Silently the henchmen lead
The victim to the table
Straps are tightened, buckles buckled
Movement barely able
Confessions screamed into the dark
Or whispered in the light
Hot coals, bamboo shoots
Cat-o-nines that bite
Bloody tears trickle down
Wounds gape like smiles
Lucky ones who died quick deaths
Lying grouped in piles
Silence echoes through the chamber
Whimpers fade away
Henchmen leave, blood dries
Straps await another day
Foot Surgery…Yuck!
Well I’m headed into foot surgery this morning and I’m a little scared. I had bunion surgery on both feet when I was sixteen and it was so excruciating that I was miserable for weeks. Now I’ve got hammertoes on my left foot. What kind of a word is that? When I tell people it makes me feel like I have the ugliest feet in the world. I’ve never considered my feet to be beautiful, but I’ve never thought them ugly either, but after today they may be! I’m really not sure how this is going to turn out, but at least I won’t be in pain. I haven’t been able to go for long walks or run or do strenuous exercise without my foot hurting and it’s really put a cramp in my physical fitness and also a damper on my mood.
Well, root for me and I’ll see you on the flipside!
Forever Yearning
Thoughts screaming
Consciousness streaming
Fevered dreaming
Never silent
Feelings thunder
Over and under
Emotions blunder
Always frenzied
Senses reeling
Hurt but healing
Layers peeling
Constantly raw
Sounds abate
Hearts hesitate
Love won’t wait
Forever yearning
Smiles Toward The Future
Your mind yearns for normalcy
While your body longs for rest
Your heart cries out for comfort
It’s been weakened by this test
The daily struggles lessen
Never fast enough for you
Weekly tests are reminders
You’d like to bid them adieu
I hold you in my embrace
And feel your frailty and strength
Each day sees you much stronger
You will go to any length
Soon you will hold me once more
And squeeze me as a new man
You’ll dance me around the floor
You’ve had so much time to plan
Here’s a kiss for tomorrow
Forget about yesterday
Put our smiles toward the future
And look toward a nice long stay
The Right Way To Write A Feature Article
The foundation of a freelance writer’s repertoire is a well-crafted feature article. The market for good features is vast and varied, and you can make an excellent living specializing in this genre. What follows is a fool-proof process for the right way to write a feature article.
Choose a Topic
Start with an idea. Is there something you have a burning desire to write about or a particular publication you want to write for? Once you have decided on your subject, the next step is to establish your premise. What is the point of your article, your working theme? You should be able to sum it up in a sentence or two. For example, here is my working hypothesis for an article on law firm marketing: To compete in an increasing complex, changing environment, many law firms across the country are exploring a revolutionary new strategy — marketing their services.
Research
Research has three purposes:
- It reaffirms and expands your hypothesis, or it reveals that you are on the wrong track and need to start over.
- In its early stages, research provides enough information to help you block out the article and write a coherent, convincing query letter.
- Finally, it fills in the meat of your article. Information is gathered through interviews, reading, and making expert use of the resources on the Web. No writer can survive today without understanding how search engines work.
Draft a Query Letter
Unless you are on assignment, the idea is to sell your article to an editor, and a good query letter is key to doing so. A query letter parallels a sales call. It should have five parts, and, ideally, each is only one paragraph long. (Editors are bleary eyed from the amount of reading material in their in-boxes.)
- The first paragraph is your introduction. It tells the editor who you are, why you’re writing, and the subject of your proposed article.
- The second paragraph focuses on the editor’s needs, and to write it you must know the general editorial policy of the publication and the audience to whom it is directed.
- Paragraph three briefly describes the content and appropriateness of your article and why the publication’s readers would want this information.
- The fourth paragraph explains why you are uniquely qualified to write this piece. What are your credentials? How much do you know about this subject? How well do you understand the aims of the publication?
- The final paragraph is very short. It is your close, your action statement, in which you state what you will do next. Will you wait to hear from the editor (risky), or will you call to follow up and, if so, when? If you say you’ll call at a certain time, do so.
Do More Research
Don’t sit around waiting for a response. Go back to researching, this time in much more depth. Immerse yourself in your subject. Gather every bit of information you can find. Talk to as many experts or sources as possible. Keep at it until you are filled to the point of overflowing. When you feel that one more fact will be a fact too many, you’ll know it’s time to stop.
“Feed the Computer”
Now it’s time to input all the data you have gathered into the computer that is your own mind. Many writers just skip this step because it requires time to read, highlight, make notes, and organize every piece of information you have gathered and self-discipline to walk away and do something unrelated to your article. You’ve put the data in; the “computer” will do the rest. Believe me, it works!
Write
This is what all that preparation has been leading to — the moment when everything comes together into a coherent whole. If you’ve followed the first five steps, you will find that you’re more than ready to write. Obviously, the intricacies of how to do it would require a separate book, but here are a few techniques I’ve found helpful over the years.
Lay out the article in outline form — introduction at the top; conclusion at the bottom; and I, II, and III in the middle. It may sound simplistic, but that format will keep you focused on sticking to no more than three main points. Your introduction must grab the reader and pull her into the story. It should also contain your thesis. The introduction basically makes the point; I, II, and III prove it; and the conclusion wraps it up in a neat little package.
Revise and Edit
Editing is not a mysterious or highly technical process. It simply means that you read your article very carefully, looking for typos, grammatical errors, repetitive words, and awkward phrasing. I have always found it useful to read my articles aloud because I tend to hear things I miss when I read. Editing provides the opportunity to see the big picture, as well as the details; to fix the glitches; and to polish the prose. As with researching and writing, there is an optimal moment to stop. When one more change might just topple your carefully constructed story, it’s time to print it one last time and turn off the computer.
The payoff to all your hard work comes when you send your manuscript to an editor. After your query letter and follow-up calls, the best-case scenario is when an editor says, “That sounds interesting. I’d like to take a look at it when it’s finished.” There is no sweeter moment — except, perhaps, seeing it in print — than dropping that envelope in a mailbox when you know someone is waiting to read it.
About the Author
Bobbi Linkemer is a ghostwriter, editor, and the author of 12 books under her own name. She has been a professional writer for 40 years, a magazine editor and journalist, and a book-writing teacher. Her clients range from Fortune 100 companies to entrepreneurs who want to write books in order to enhance their credibility and build their businesses. Visit her Website at: http://www.WriteANonfictionBook.com
The Moray Mambo
The moray moved
Through the sea of blue
Just like a bright ribbon of green
Slithering slow
Gliding back and forth
The coolest thing I’d ever seen
It’s gaping mouth
Showed me lots of teeth
Threatening me to keep away
I followed it
To it’s hiding place
Hoping to see it catch some prey
A fish swam close
To where it waited
The moray nowhere to be seen
Then it attacked
Like a lightening flash
And nabbed him an angelfish queen
Looking back now
I’ll never forget
Watching a predator and prey
Such beauty there
But also danger
Ocean Predator-The Shark
The predator moves through the water
Surveying the deep blue ocean
Searching for something juicy to eat
Consistently always in motion
With silvery skin and fins so sleek
He glides through the water sight unseen
Lurking in shadow and hiding in shade
His teeth are dangerous and they gleam
He’s spotted and striped, silver and gray
And shapes small to the size of a whale
He can smell the blood from miles away
And will get his victim without fail
With deadly might he will stalk the night
The king of the wide world of the sea
Respect him when you’re in the water


